Monday, July 16, 2007

"sweet escape" was not among her songs

Today on the MRT, on the way home from work, there were sights and sounds that could just about fit into the palm: miniature narratives for the making. Here's one:

A wisp of a girl, maybe 8 years old, in a plain cotton white dress with spaghetti straps, enters the carriage with a woman in a blouse with forgettable prints and black wide trousers. The woman wears a placid expression on her lined face; she looks as imperturble as her grey hair in its short perm.

The girl sings one American pop song after another as she stands next to the woman, sometimes swaying to the imaginary accompaniment. The songs are about love, longing, heartache. Her voice is thin, like the material of her dress. Gwen Stefani is not in her repertoire. She wears round glasses. Her eyes peer through them, unblinking. She points her fancy white leather shoes inwards and then outwards. They are her favourite part of the outfit.

The old woman looks ahead steadily. She does not hold on to the girl. When a seat became available, she walked hurriedly across to that side of the carriage and planted herself firmly down. The child remained standing in their former position. As I alighted, I caught one last glimpse. She is not holding on to anything and she does not seem to care that her singing is drawing the attention of tired commuters.

4 Comments:

Blogger Unknown said...

Your blog is interesting!
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Please, send me its photo
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10:35 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Whaaaaa... you take public transport now ha like me! So patriotic - wahahaha... But the romance won't last: soon you will wish the stupid idiots will clear off to let you get out first and the smelly sweaty NS boy will not lean on your hand and the uncle in slippers will not pick his toenails and the heow healthy-looking auntie will not stand so close like she wants your seat...

Dr Ah Beng

5:16 PM  
Blogger wheyface said...

Firstly, I only have ugly tee-shirts.

Secondly, Dr Ah Beng, I think you should write a poem about your commuting experiences. Negative negative = positive!

8:36 PM  
Blogger Plain Forgiven said...

Hmmm...you've had an encounter of the MRT kind. And there's music as well. Eerie - reminds me of some Spielberg movie.

Your narration never fails to inspire me into working harder at being a wordsnmith. :-)

Oh, the carefree abandon of a child. Do I have that, I wonder?

Plainforgiven

4:37 AM  

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